Monday, January 23, 2017

Journal 2 Hannah Shapiro

Emma Watson, in 2013, spoke to the United Nations about HeForShe, an operation she supports that campaigns for equality amongst men and women and the actual meaning of feminism. I think her speech is the perfect example of Bitzer’s definition of the rhetorical situation, or any situation where persuasion is involved with an audience and an exigence. Through the use of rhetoric, Watson attempts to persuade her audience to join her HeForShe campaign. She speaks to all ages, all backgrounds, and includes anecdotes for the audience to relate to, since she isn’t exactly the most relatable woman in the world. She spoke to an audience that is “capable of influence” and “calls [them] to action.”
Edbauer, however defines the rhetorical definition a tad bit differently than Bitzer. She believes that the rhetorical situation is something that “engages processes and encounters.” It is something that involves a doing, a thinking, not necessarily in that order. For instance, this Writing, Editing, and Print Online class, or really most classes in general, is an example of a rhetorical situation. A professor “understands and practices” his or her presentation of information. It is an extended process to develop they conveyor of knowledge from the mind of the professor, to a successful lesson plan, to the minds of students. It is an exchange of knowledge, a product of thinking that results in doing, but also a doing that results in thinking. Like Edbauer states, the two sort of go hand in hand and should only be separated by a slight slash, if that.  Whatever they may be lecturing on, they are asking the audience, the students to think about what is being said, and then use it in everyday life. There is an evident effect, whether it be negative or positive.
I’d like to think that Edbauer and Bitzer both think of rhetorical situations as a call to action. While for Bitzer it is more about persuasion, and for Edbauer it is more about the understanding of the knowledge portrayed and the effects that come of such conveyance of knowledge, they both want to elicit some sort of response in their audience. They want to spark change in one way or another. The rhetorical situation is about change.

            

2 comments:

  1. Using Emma Watson as an example was very smart because it was not something I had personally heard of before. Because you talked about something not well known it made me more interested in it. I also liked how you used classes, or lecturing, as an example. It's very relatable and makes you see a different perspective of the rhetorical situation.

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  2. I like how you showed how rhetorical situation is about change, which I agree with. Emma Watson is a good example to use, I think, since she is very well-known and easy to recognize. Very nice post! :)

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