1. They had an intended audience and network. 2. Composing and editing was a big part of this project. 3. I really liked the idea of a t-shirt. 4. Knew the information well.
1. They talked about circulation and how they weren't able to circulate their texts because of their organization not approving them yet. 2. They composed and designed different texts. 3. I liked that they created a t-shirt. It was very cute. 4. I would create a t-shirt because college students love t-shirts and they are easy advertisement.
1. All of the materials are different for each artifacts they created. 2. It's important to think about what the organization that you're working with wants. 3. I like the tshirt because it shows that they care about every age group with the colors. 4. I would think about color schemes for the next time I work with an organization because that can pull people in.
1. I saw them use audience alot! All texts were designed and circulated to persuade audience to contribute/care about the cause. 2. I earned that different age groups may require different text in order to best get their attention. 3. I like that they quickly picked back up after they did not get to work with the desired organization. 4. I would take their t-shirt idea... creative!
1.audience (dog lovers) clearly targeted. 2. writing doesn't have o be on a conventional surface 3. the tshirts. great way to transfer info especially since tshirts are EVERYWHERE on campus and we all like to read them as people walk by 4. appealing but not overwhelming is important
1. Audience- see #4 2. A lot of people used flyers but the design of it is so important. 3. Again- love the tshirt. Only one group did it and it's so appealing. 4. I like how they aimed for a crowd that wasn't obvious. They went the children route rather than adults.
I see assemblage and network important in this. I think assemblage takes many forms, and one of them is having a passion in correspondence with your composition. It is very obvious that this group is passionate about their organization. They had trouble getting an organization to work with them so I think networking is important in this case. I think that in writing, editing and composing, it’s important to not only identify your audience but to also identify your most effective audience. As aforementioned, I like how passio nate they were about their organization. If I had to represent a professional organization, I would do my best to identify my most effective audience.
1. Circulation (or lack of), artifacts/material 2. Things don't always turn out the way you want and you have to adapt to situations. 3. The tshirt is adorable!! And the flyer was visually appealing.
1. They had wanted their t-shirt to be able to be circulated within the audience of college students and with younger kids as well. Their video was able to be circulated online through social media like facebook. 2. What I learned from this presentation is that often the creator doesn't have the last say in the composition in a work. 3. What I had liked about this organization was that they were expanding their audience outside of just college students to younger kids as well. 4. What I think I could take with me from this presentation to a professional setting is that often you have to put work through a third party before distributing information out into the world.
1. Audience is really important like with the t-shirt they picked a certain audience 2. Sometimes organizations are not always able to communicate with you but that's life. 3. I really like the t-shirt I'd tots wear it 4. I like the way they presented their texts and would do something like that
1. they're audience is very large and they understand who to connect to when adopting dogs. The materials were also varying and well done. 2. Everyone can benefit from it! Even pups! 3. I liked their t-shirt design and the fact they were also trying to connect to children 4. their professionalism and interest in the subject matter
1) Their T-shirt can be used as circulation because they can be sold and also when people wear them they are giving out information about the organization. Their materials are a video, T-shirt,and flyer. Their audience is anyone interested in adopting a dog from the Tallahassee Animal Shelter 2) writing, editing, and composing 3) I liked the video the most. I think videos are the most effective way to get a lot of information out 4) I would take away their T-shirt idea since it's fun and a good way of marketing!
1.Assemblage, they took the information and transformed it into a t shirt, flyer, and video. 2.I learned that persuasion is involved in writing, editing, and composing. 3. I loved the t shirt. I think its a really good way to draw attention to their organization. 4. This group was very organized. I would use their organization on any future professional organizations that I would represent.
1. I saw the use of circulation in the types of artifacts that they used and the places in which they made a point of having the artifacts posted both around campus and on social media platforms 2. I learned more about the constraints associated with every project. 3. I liked the tshirt idea the most. I think this group did a great job designing the shirt in a way that would grasp a couple of different types of audiences. This really proved how much they thought about audience and circulation and genre in their composing process. 4. I liked their use of teamwork in communicating directly with the organization
1. I see design in the design of the t-shirt and flyers. I see material and genre through the multiple media of the texts as a video, flyer, and t-shirt. 2. I learned that in composing sometimes there is someone above you that needs to approve of your work before it can serve its purpose. 3. I liked the t-shirt because it helps to address a wide audience while serving a functional purpose. 4. I would take the use of a video to help appeal to the main demographic that the campaign is aiming for.
1. material: using t-shirts to advertise, also goes with circulation 2. t-shirts are a good way to advertise because it is a walking billboard 3. the video was very well put together 4. use vibrant colors on flyer and other things to get the word out effectively
1. audience, network 2. writing can consist of many mediums 3. i liked the idea of the t shirt design and flyer they were really creative. 4. I would apply t shirt design as a way of circulation.
1. They haven't been able to circulate their texts as of yet but hope to do so soon. Wanted to design the T-shirt for a younger audience (children), good thought process.
2. Thinking about composing the shirt design for a specific audience.
3. I liked the flier, it looked really cool.
4. I could use the rationale of thinking about what would be the most effective design for a text is something that I could take from this group
1. The idea of using circulation through t-shirts is great on a college campus. This also connects to the group's intended audience. 2. This group found gaining attention through design very important in composing. 3. I really like the design on the t-shirt! 4. I would definitely integrate some of the group's design techniques.
1. Design, Audience, Circulation, Remediation 2. Your video was very well composed. I loved the music. 3. I loved the tshirt! very relatable for college students. I'm a big fan of the oversize tshirt look and would definitely be interested. 4. Dressing professionally is super important and I think you all did a very good job presenting yourselves in a nice manner.
1. Circulation, or lack there of. Great targets audience. 2. Spreading a message through texts can come in many different forms. 3. Loved the color scheme! texts seem effective! 4. It can be hard to communicate with clients, overcoming this challenge is important.
1) Audience by just trying to get more people to adopts pets in need. 2) Using the bright colors on the dark shirt to make it stand out more. 3) Another group helping animals! 4) I thought that there video was well done
1. Audience, circulation, and genre. 2. The use of a T shirt as a form of composition 3. I really enjoyed the video because it helped me connect more to the cause 4 I would take away the use of a T shirt to promote an organization.
1. Addressed issues with circulation. Unique genres with good designs to appeal to a certain audience. 2. Social media is a huge part of college life, so it's a great way of distributing. 3. I love animals, so the topic and organization appeals to me. 4. First hand experience is super important.
Networking to families that could foster and adopt another animal. Once again the t-shirt adds a unique way of circulation to reach a wider audience. The video is an assemblage of information about the information. However, since they did not get approval they were not able to circulate out like they would have liked. Audience for a younger crowd and children.
Composing to get the attention and make things pop. Editing through placing the information on a dark background to stand out. Writing to be appealing but not overwhelming.
I love the t-shirt idea again. I just think it's a unique and great way to garnish an audience.
Playing to emotions to gather an audience and have a desired affect.
I learned that it's important to give yourself enough time to get your writing and project done and always check with the people who are in charge about deadlines.
I loved the video!
What I would use in my own presentation is the use of a Prezi presentation!
1. Design helped connect them to audiences 2. That it can effectively promote any and everything 3. I like how they reached outside the FSU audience 4. The engaging aspect was something I would consider
1. Materials: Tshirt, flyer, video Audience: families, volunteers, community members circulation: had some constraints because of the company's marketing team
2. "appealing but not overwhelming"
3. I liked how professional they were when dealing with their company
4. Positive through their constraints: worked through the lack of circulation and still gained the experience of working with another company
1. Each artifact spoke to a different audience. 2. Working with an organization can be difficult, not only because of collaboration, but also because of lack of communication. 3. I enjoyed how each of the texts represented a different aspect of the organization. 4. I would incorporate the idea of focusing on a single element within a text, and using different ads to target specific individuals. 3. 4.
1. They had a good variety of materiality. 2. Everything is a process and has a timeline. That was a constraint for their project but it is a true fact. 3. Their video was nicely done! 4. Just as they collaborated with a marketing team, that is something that will most likely happen in a professional setting.
1. Their audience was a younger crowd, such as children. T-shirts will circulate the information by having people buy and wear them. The flyers were circulated around campus. Social media circulation was used as well. 2. I learned about working with established companies and working through all of the regulations that come with them. 3. I really liked the video 4. I thought they worked really well with the organization.
1) circulation was super present throughout their presentation 2) i learned circulation is important to get the information out there 3)i liked the video the best because it pulls on the heart strings 4)i would use how they made the video to attract more people to be aware of what the organization is all about
1. I see material through the video, and circulation through the t-shirt. 2. I leanred that a t-shirt can be effective to an audience of college students. 3. I liked the t-shirt a lot because it was cute and different. 4. I would take that you should represent an organization you feel passionate about.
1. I see all of the terms above, minus circulation because this group was not able to start that process yet. 2. from this i learned about the importance of experience, assemblage, etc within the composing process. 3. i like the idea of the T-shirt. super unique because we haven't seen anything like this yet during presentations. good work! 4. great work you guys!
1. How did you see the keywords enacted in the work this group did? (Audience, Assemblage, Circulation, Design, Exigence, Genre, Material, Network, Remediation) T-shirt: design/audience: aimed at younger demographic with bright colors and fun font. Flyer: design: bright colors and picture of a dog with catchphrase video: design/circulation: inspirational rock music underscoring cute dogs.
2.What did you learn about writing, editing, and/or composing? Creating is better than waiting around for the okay to get going. Keep playing with ideas
3.What did like most in this presentation and why? The message passed along from the Tallahassee adoption center's head committee: don't adopt dogs if you know you'll have to give him/her up after graduating.
4.If you were tasked with representing a professional organization in the future, what could you take and apply from this group’s presentation? Get footage at the organization's establishment to show it off
1. They had an intended audience and network.
ReplyDelete2. Composing and editing was a big part of this project.
3. I really liked the idea of a t-shirt.
4. Knew the information well.
1. They talked about circulation and how they weren't able to circulate their texts because of their organization not approving them yet.
ReplyDelete2. They composed and designed different texts.
3. I liked that they created a t-shirt. It was very cute.
4. I would create a t-shirt because college students love t-shirts and they are easy advertisement.
1. All of the materials are different for each artifacts they created.
ReplyDelete2. It's important to think about what the organization that you're working with wants.
3. I like the tshirt because it shows that they care about every age group with the colors.
4. I would think about color schemes for the next time I work with an organization because that can pull people in.
1. I saw them use audience alot! All texts were designed and circulated to persuade audience to contribute/care about the cause.
ReplyDelete2. I earned that different age groups may require different text in order to best get their attention.
3. I like that they quickly picked back up after they did not get to work with the desired organization.
4. I would take their t-shirt idea... creative!
1.audience (dog lovers) clearly targeted.
ReplyDelete2. writing doesn't have o be on a conventional surface
3. the tshirts. great way to transfer info especially since tshirts are EVERYWHERE on campus and we all like to read them as people walk by
4. appealing but not overwhelming is important
1. Audience- see #4
ReplyDelete2. A lot of people used flyers but the design of it is so important.
3. Again- love the tshirt. Only one group did it and it's so appealing.
4. I like how they aimed for a crowd that wasn't obvious. They went the children route rather than adults.
I see assemblage and network important in this. I think assemblage takes many forms, and one of them is having a passion in correspondence with your composition. It is very obvious that this group is passionate about their organization. They had trouble getting an organization to work with them so I think networking is important in this case. I think that in writing, editing and composing, it’s important to not only identify your audience but to also identify your most effective audience. As aforementioned, I like how passio
ReplyDeletenate they were about their organization. If I had to represent a professional organization, I would do my best to identify my most effective audience.
1. Circulation (or lack of), artifacts/material
ReplyDelete2. Things don't always turn out the way you want and you have to adapt to situations.
3. The tshirt is adorable!! And the flyer was visually appealing.
1. They had wanted their t-shirt to be able to be circulated within the audience of college students and with younger kids as well. Their video was able to be circulated online through social media like facebook.
ReplyDelete2. What I learned from this presentation is that often the creator doesn't have the last say in the composition in a work.
3. What I had liked about this organization was that they were expanding their audience outside of just college students to younger kids as well.
4. What I think I could take with me from this presentation to a professional setting is that often you have to put work through a third party before distributing information out into the world.
1. Audience is really important like with the t-shirt they picked a certain audience
ReplyDelete2. Sometimes organizations are not always able to communicate with you but that's life.
3. I really like the t-shirt I'd tots wear it
4. I like the way they presented their texts and would do something like that
1. they're audience is very large and they understand who to connect to when adopting dogs. The materials were also varying and well done.
ReplyDelete2. Everyone can benefit from it! Even pups!
3. I liked their t-shirt design and the fact they were also trying to connect to children
4. their professionalism and interest in the subject matter
1) Their T-shirt can be used as circulation because they can be sold and also when people wear them they are giving out information about the organization. Their materials are a video, T-shirt,and flyer. Their audience is anyone interested in adopting a dog from the Tallahassee Animal Shelter
ReplyDelete2) writing, editing, and composing
3) I liked the video the most. I think videos are the most effective way to get a lot of information out
4) I would take away their T-shirt idea since it's fun and a good way of marketing!
1.Assemblage, they took the information and transformed it into a t shirt, flyer, and video.
ReplyDelete2.I learned that persuasion is involved in writing, editing, and composing.
3. I loved the t shirt. I think its a really good way to draw attention to their organization.
4. This group was very organized. I would use their organization on any future professional organizations that I would represent.
1. I saw the use of circulation in the types of artifacts that they used and the places in which they made a point of having the artifacts posted both around campus and on social media platforms
ReplyDelete2. I learned more about the constraints associated with every project.
3. I liked the tshirt idea the most. I think this group did a great job designing the shirt in a way that would grasp a couple of different types of audiences. This really proved how much they thought about audience and circulation and genre in their composing process.
4. I liked their use of teamwork in communicating directly with the organization
1. I see design in the design of the t-shirt and flyers. I see material and genre through the multiple media of the texts as a video, flyer, and t-shirt.
ReplyDelete2. I learned that in composing sometimes there is someone above you that needs to approve of your work before it can serve its purpose.
3. I liked the t-shirt because it helps to address a wide audience while serving a functional purpose.
4. I would take the use of a video to help appeal to the main demographic that the campaign is aiming for.
1. material: using t-shirts to advertise, also goes with circulation
ReplyDelete2. t-shirts are a good way to advertise because it is a walking billboard
3. the video was very well put together
4. use vibrant colors on flyer and other things to get the word out effectively
1. audience, network
ReplyDelete2. writing can consist of many mediums
3. i liked the idea of the t shirt design and flyer they were really creative.
4. I would apply t shirt design as a way of circulation.
1. Circulation and their lack of it.
ReplyDelete2. constraints are everywhere
3. The t-shirts
4. Really communicating with what my organization wants
1. They haven't been able to circulate their texts as of yet but hope to do so soon. Wanted to design the T-shirt for a younger audience (children), good thought process.
ReplyDelete2. Thinking about composing the shirt design for a specific audience.
3. I liked the flier, it looked really cool.
4. I could use the rationale of thinking about what would be the most effective design for a text is something that I could take from this group
1. The idea of using circulation through t-shirts is great on a college campus. This also connects to the group's intended audience.
ReplyDelete2. This group found gaining attention through design very important in composing.
3. I really like the design on the t-shirt!
4. I would definitely integrate some of the group's design techniques.
1. Design, Audience, Circulation, Remediation
ReplyDelete2. Your video was very well composed. I loved the music.
3. I loved the tshirt! very relatable for college students. I'm a big fan of the oversize tshirt look and would definitely be interested.
4. Dressing professionally is super important and I think you all did a very good job presenting yourselves in a nice manner.
1. Circulation, or lack there of. Great targets audience.
ReplyDelete2. Spreading a message through texts can come in many different forms.
3. Loved the color scheme! texts seem effective!
4. It can be hard to communicate with clients, overcoming this challenge is important.
1) Audience by just trying to get more people to adopts pets in need.
ReplyDelete2) Using the bright colors on the dark shirt to make it stand out more.
3) Another group helping animals!
4) I thought that there video was well done
1. Audience, circulation, and genre.
ReplyDelete2. The use of a T shirt as a form of composition
3. I really enjoyed the video because it helped me connect more to the cause
4 I would take away the use of a T shirt to promote an organization.
1. Addressed issues with circulation. Unique genres with good designs to appeal to a certain audience.
ReplyDelete2. Social media is a huge part of college life, so it's a great way of distributing.
3. I love animals, so the topic and organization appeals to me.
4. First hand experience is super important.
Networking to families that could foster and adopt another animal. Once again the t-shirt adds a unique way of circulation to reach a wider audience. The video is an assemblage of information about the information. However, since they did not get approval they were not able to circulate out like they would have liked. Audience for a younger crowd and children.
ReplyDeleteComposing to get the attention and make things pop. Editing through placing the information on a dark background to stand out. Writing to be appealing but not overwhelming.
I love the t-shirt idea again. I just think it's a unique and great way to garnish an audience.
Playing to emotions to gather an audience and have a desired affect.
Tallahassee Animal Shelter
ReplyDeleteAudience, Material, Circulation
I learned that it's important to give yourself enough time to get your writing and project done and always check with the people who are in charge about deadlines.
I loved the video!
What I would use in my own presentation is the use of a Prezi presentation!
1. Design helped connect them to audiences
ReplyDelete2. That it can effectively promote any and everything
3. I like how they reached outside the FSU audience
4. The engaging aspect was something I would consider
1. Materials: Tshirt, flyer, video
ReplyDeleteAudience: families, volunteers, community members
circulation: had some constraints because of the company's marketing team
2. "appealing but not overwhelming"
3. I liked how professional they were when dealing with their company
4. Positive through their constraints: worked through the lack of circulation and still gained the experience of working with another company
1. Each artifact spoke to a different audience.
ReplyDelete2. Working with an organization can be difficult, not only because of collaboration, but also because of lack of communication.
3. I enjoyed how each of the texts represented a different aspect of the organization.
4. I would incorporate the idea of focusing on a single element within a text, and using different ads to target specific individuals.
3.
4.
1. They had a good variety of materiality.
ReplyDelete2. Everything is a process and has a timeline. That was a constraint for their project but it is a true fact.
3. Their video was nicely done!
4. Just as they collaborated with a marketing team, that is something that will most likely happen in a professional setting.
1. Their audience was a younger crowd, such as children. T-shirts will circulate the information by having people buy and wear them. The flyers were circulated around campus. Social media circulation was used as well.
ReplyDelete2. I learned about working with established companies and working through all of the regulations that come with them.
3. I really liked the video
4. I thought they worked really well with the organization.
t-shirt, flyer, video
ReplyDeleteI really liked the video because it showed the dogs and made you want to go volunteer at the shelter. The flyer was also very aesthetically pleasing.
1) circulation was super present throughout their presentation
ReplyDelete2) i learned circulation is important to get the information out there
3)i liked the video the best because it pulls on the heart strings
4)i would use how they made the video to attract more people to be aware of what the organization is all about
1. I see material through the video, and circulation through the t-shirt.
ReplyDelete2. I leanred that a t-shirt can be effective to an audience of college students.
3. I liked the t-shirt a lot because it was cute and different.
4. I would take that you should represent an organization you feel passionate about.
1. I see all of the terms above, minus circulation because this group was not able to start that process yet.
ReplyDelete2. from this i learned about the importance of experience, assemblage, etc within the composing process.
3. i like the idea of the T-shirt. super unique because we haven't seen anything like this yet during presentations. good work!
4. great work you guys!
1. How did you see the keywords enacted in the work this group did? (Audience, Assemblage, Circulation, Design, Exigence, Genre, Material, Network, Remediation)
ReplyDeleteT-shirt: design/audience: aimed at younger demographic with bright colors and fun font.
Flyer: design: bright colors and picture of a dog with catchphrase
video: design/circulation: inspirational rock music underscoring cute dogs.
2.What did you learn about writing, editing, and/or composing?
Creating is better than waiting around for the okay to get going. Keep playing with ideas
3.What did like most in this presentation and why?
The message passed along from the Tallahassee adoption center's head committee: don't adopt dogs if you know you'll have to give him/her up after graduating.
4.If you were tasked with representing a professional organization in the future, what could you take and apply from this group’s presentation?
Get footage at the organization's establishment to show it off