1) circulation was present in their project as they used different ways to get their info out there 2)i learned circulation is important in order to raise awareness 3)i liked how they baked cucpakes and then also had a little something taped to it that we read and could scan to download the app 3) i would use how they chose to circulate the information through food because food always gets peoples attention
1. Network-app, audience-animal lovers, circulation-app. 2. I learned that communication is key for the writing, composing, and editing process and that it affected their process. 3. the cupcakes were great. 4. YOU MADE AN APP. That's amazing!! Definitely something to think about when preparing a proposal for an organizaton.
1. Audience and Circulation tools were clear- the design of their artifacts was also professional and well done 2. Food makes people pay attention 3. INCREDIBLE CUPCAKES also I love the doggos 4. The fact they created an app for them is really incredible.
1. Audience- animal lovers which the majority of us are 2. It's really beneficial to use themes that go along with what the company already has. 3. Cupcakes- genius!! 4. Obviously bringing cupcakes will make everyone happy but to attach how to get the app to them is so smart because we are forced to look at them.
1. circulation: a lot of great ways to get the word out 2. social media is a big part of promoting an organization 3. the cupcakes, of course 4. when working with animals, always use pictures of them
1. I've never heard of people using cupcakes to circulate things. 2. Composing is everywhere! 3. The cupcakes, obviously. plus its a really great cause! 4. Meeting in person isn't a requirement, as long as it works for both parties.
1.Network is a key term that I thought was important in this project because of the app and the social media headers. 2.writing, editing and composing can involve food! 3.Cupcakes...duh! They grabbed my attention, and I thought the directions to download the app were really creative. 4. In the future if I were to work on another campaign, I would keep in mind that everyone loves food.
1) All of the artifacts work to reach an audience through circulation. 2) A color scheme helps a lot. 3) The cupcakes were smart, but they were also smart because they forced people to look at the QR code. 4) I love the way the brochure is planned out.
1) Audience, targeting people because people love animals, especially animals in need 2) To take closer looks at the businesses that you are working with. 3) Free cupcakes were great. 4) Be passionate about what you are doing.
I think that they really took their audience into account by making us all cupcakes. I learned the importance of looking at a website and contacting the organization to make sure the website is good. I liked the cupcakes the most, and I like how passionate they are about the organization. I would take away the importance of recognizing your audience.
1. The audience was clearly their first priority in order to get their texts circulated 2. I learned that it can be edible 3.I really liked how the brochure was appealing to the eye 4. I would take the audience interaction they shred with the cupcakes.
1. audience, assemblage, circulation 2. that writing to your audience is major key, satisfying them is what makes a project effective. 3. what i liked most was the website 4. i would apply the website because its easier to navigate through while at the same time being able to present.
1. Circulation was huge with the brochure. 2. Writing, editing, and composing can work in multiple ways (cupcakes). 3. I really liked the cupcakes (: 4. They included the results of the project and it was well presented.
1. You can see on the flyer they pull the audience in by using a quote that pulls at the heart strings. 2. I learned that giving people all the information they need can ease up composing because people won't have questions. 3. I like the brochure because it shows some of the dogs that are up for adoption. 4. Creating an app is a really good idea that I would be willing to do for a company if they needed it.
1. Audience, circulation, assemblage 2. Colors matter!!! 3. The brochure was so cute!!! The pictures of the dogs pulled at heart strings. 4. An app was a fantastic idea! Definitely something to keep in mind.
1. I see the word material through the material texts circulating around the room. I see network through the use of other businesses and shelters that they take pets from. 2. I learned that creating and composing can be super unique through the creation of an app 3. I liked the use of an app because it was so unique and made the group stand out. 4. If I took one thing from this group it would be the creativity of the texts and how they were able to appeal to pathos, ethos, and logos.
1. Network is important in reaching the group's audience. Circulation of their different texts were also very important. 2. Integrating emotional appeals in composing can be very effective! 3. The cupcakes were great! 4. I would definitely integrate the group's presentation skills and specifically integrating baked goods.
1. all of that terms were involved! 2. from this project i learned about the importance of organization and design. 3. Such great work, guys. Not only did you guys make delicious cupcakes that i inhaled in one bite but your project was so well done. i can't believe you made an app! thats so impressive and shows your dedication. you were also so aware of your organization and all of the details. along with that, the brochure was extremely well designed, adorable, easy to follow, organized, etc. 4. always makes sure social media is up to date so your content is correct and not misleading!
1. assemblage/remediation shown in the colors of the poster. 2. baked good are an effective mode of circulation.. 3. the cupcake QR codes were the best part... 4. everyone loves food and it's an effective way to get someone to listen to you/to circulate your idea
1) Their audience is anybody interested in rescuing a dog or volunteering with Last Hope. They circulated their flyer, and the pull tabs made the circulation extremely effective. 2) writing, editing, and composing included getting to know the company your representing very well so that you get the job done effectively. 3) I like that they knew the cause very well and had a lot to say about it 4) I would take away the pull tab flyer idea
1. I learned that communication is key with an organization. 2. I learned about pull tabs! They were helpful for measuring effectiveness of the text. 3. I liked their intentional choosing of photo to evoke emotion and action in the audience. (EX: Puppy pleading on the flyer.) 4. I would use their placement of photos to sway an audience.
1. They talked about different places they circulated their brochure and flyers. I thought it was smart to take it to Mervs. 2. They had to edit their brochure after sending it to the organization based on what they wanted. 3. I liked that they passed out cupcakes with business cards attached, it is a good, easy advertisement because who doesn't want a cupcake? 4. I would definitely take the cupcake with business cards ideas. It's super smart!
1. Audience, Circulation, and Material 2. I learned about the importance of material; reffering to making the brochure with a better material. 3. I really liked the brochure and the flyer actually made me tear up 4. I learned about the importance of materiality and connecting to the intended audience.
1. The circulation of cupcakes is a really good really tasty idea. It appears that they had a really good circulation with the spread of their tear away fliers and their brochures. 2. I learned that it is really easy to appeal to people get an audience to take your information when you give them food to go along with it. 3. I really liked that they fed us all cupcakes, like honestly made my day. I also liked their idea of an app that sounds really complicated and impressed me. 4. Something I could take from this presentation for future professional use is having hard copies of the texts during the presentation so that who you are speaking to have something physical to view.
1. Distribution and placement aided to their success. 2. They talked a lot about the struggles with the project and I think that is important to talk about in relations to editing. 3. The cupcake really got me interested in the presentation which worked well. 4. Calling places where ads were posted to understand the response was key in understanding project success.
1. The brochure is informative to an audience, and assembling the brochure looks like it was work.
2. Composing a text, especially for an organization, needs feedback from the org, as the brochure is an example of. Composing the flier, creating texts with elements that will incite emotion in an audience
3. I loved everything! Everything looked so good, I can't decide which was my favorite.
4. Making your texts look really professional and thinking about how they will he received I something this group did really well.
1. Circulation and network by using a website. 2. I learned that pull tabs are very effective in measuring the success of a flyer. 3. I liked the flyer and the pathos that was used with the photo of the sad dog. 4. If the organization is something you feel connected with, it is easy to work with them.
1. Audience: people looking to adopt dogs like at vet clinics and mervs Circulation: flyers in places were pet owners could be found Genre and design: using the emotions behind rescuing dogs in their design and genre
2. Communication and common meeting place was a constraint.
3. love how passionate they were. I could also tell that they were thinking outside of the box while thinking of places to drop their flyers.
4. Their video was really great and included pictures, social media links, and rhetoric.
1. Circulation was really shown in the different ways they created texts. Both prints and media 2. Not all texts need to be in the same medium 3. CUPCAKES!!!!!! Its obvious. But also really they created an app that's incredible. Also A++ everything about this project is great and it is very clear you guys worked very hard 4. I would use their creation of an app to show all their work
1. I saw the use of circulation in the types of artifacts that they used and the places in which they made a point of having the artifacts posted both around campus and on social media platforms 2. I learned more about the constraints associated with every project. 3. I liked the campaign video the most. I feel that video footage is the best way to advocate for an emotional campaign and a media that is easily circulated on all social media platforms and through news platforms as well. 4. I liked their use of teamwork in communicating directly with the organization
1. Assemblage and audience were enacted 2. All three are a back and forth process 3. The brochure due to amount of information put into it. 4. Know how to work your audience.
1. constraints with organization. Looked into what type of audience they were hoping to target. 2.Being creative with the distribution part of creating texts can be important. 3.Wow!!!!! an app is an excellent way to help the cause. Very professional all around. 4. being committed to the organization can transform the way others see your work and organization in a positive light.
1. I think the group focuses a lot on circulation. 2. effort in circulation can go far with the right amount of effort. 3. I really liked the groups video. It was so cute and definitely sparked my interest. 4. I would take away how informative they were about the organization and their own experience.
I liked the colors and aesthetic and the way that the cupcakes even matched the artifacts. Putting the artifacts in areas where people bring animals is a really great idea.
1. Audience is a bit wider than most of the other groups. Is more of an advertising/informational campaign than promoting specific events. 2. Adobe creative is worth it 3. I liked the way each text felt similar, and promoted the main goal of the organization. 4. Choosing specific locations to post flyers/brochures.Try to limit waste of paper/resources
1. They circulated brochures and flyers both in the community and the University and seemed to be very successful. They also used social media circulation. 2. I learned that video can be very effective. 3. I really liked the video. 4. By making social media material, they met a need for the organization, which is always a good thing.
1.This group had a great understanding of their audience and the material they were supposed to be circulating. 2. I learned that writing and composing for a client involved a bit of research beforehand. 3. I liked their flyer because the color scheme was very appealing and still included enough information. 4. From this presentation I learned that it is very helpful to use your own connections to create an impact for the said organization.
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ReplyDelete1) circulation was present in their project as they used different ways to get their info out there
ReplyDelete2)i learned circulation is important in order to raise awareness
3)i liked how they baked cucpakes and then also had a little something taped to it that we read and could scan to download the app
3) i would use how they chose to circulate the information through food because food always gets peoples attention
1. Network-app, audience-animal lovers, circulation-app.
ReplyDelete2. I learned that communication is key for the writing, composing, and editing process and that it affected their process.
3. the cupcakes were great.
4. YOU MADE AN APP. That's amazing!! Definitely something to think about when preparing a proposal for an organizaton.
1. Audience and Circulation tools were clear- the design of their artifacts was also professional and well done
ReplyDelete2. Food makes people pay attention
3. INCREDIBLE CUPCAKES also I love the doggos
4. The fact they created an app for them is really incredible.
1. Audience- animal lovers which the majority of us are
ReplyDelete2. It's really beneficial to use themes that go along with what the company already has.
3. Cupcakes- genius!!
4. Obviously bringing cupcakes will make everyone happy but to attach how to get the app to them is so smart because we are forced to look at them.
1. circulation: a lot of great ways to get the word out
ReplyDelete2. social media is a big part of promoting an organization
3. the cupcakes, of course
4. when working with animals, always use pictures of them
1. I've never heard of people using cupcakes to circulate things.
ReplyDelete2. Composing is everywhere!
3. The cupcakes, obviously. plus its a really great cause!
4. Meeting in person isn't a requirement, as long as it works for both parties.
1.Network is a key term that I thought was important in this project because of the app and the social media headers.
ReplyDelete2.writing, editing and composing can involve food!
3.Cupcakes...duh! They grabbed my attention, and I thought the directions to download the app were really creative.
4. In the future if I were to work on another campaign, I would keep in mind that everyone loves food.
1) All of the artifacts work to reach an audience through circulation.
ReplyDelete2) A color scheme helps a lot.
3) The cupcakes were smart, but they were also smart because they forced people to look at the QR code.
4) I love the way the brochure is planned out.
1) Audience, targeting people because people love animals, especially animals in need
ReplyDelete2) To take closer looks at the businesses that you are working with.
3) Free cupcakes were great.
4) Be passionate about what you are doing.
I think that they really took their audience into account by making us all cupcakes. I learned the importance of looking at a website and contacting the organization to make sure the website is good. I liked the cupcakes the most, and I like how passionate they are about the organization. I would take away the importance of recognizing your audience.
ReplyDelete1. The audience was clearly their first priority in order to get their texts circulated
ReplyDelete2. I learned that it can be edible
3.I really liked how the brochure was appealing to the eye
4. I would take the audience interaction they shred with the cupcakes.
1. audience, assemblage, circulation
ReplyDelete2. that writing to your audience is major key, satisfying them is what makes a project effective.
3. what i liked most was the website
4. i would apply the website because its easier to navigate through while at the same time being able to present.
1. Circulation was huge with the brochure.
ReplyDelete2. Writing, editing, and composing can work in multiple ways (cupcakes).
3. I really liked the cupcakes (:
4. They included the results of the project and it was well presented.
1. You can see on the flyer they pull the audience in by using a quote that pulls at the heart strings.
ReplyDelete2. I learned that giving people all the information they need can ease up composing because people won't have questions.
3. I like the brochure because it shows some of the dogs that are up for adoption.
4. Creating an app is a really good idea that I would be willing to do for a company if they needed it.
1. Audience, circulation, assemblage
ReplyDelete2. Colors matter!!!
3. The brochure was so cute!!! The pictures of the dogs pulled at heart strings.
4. An app was a fantastic idea! Definitely something to keep in mind.
THE VIDEO OMG
Delete1. I see the word material through the material texts circulating around the room. I see network through the use of other businesses and shelters that they take pets from.
ReplyDelete2. I learned that creating and composing can be super unique through the creation of an app
3. I liked the use of an app because it was so unique and made the group stand out.
4. If I took one thing from this group it would be the creativity of the texts and how they were able to appeal to pathos, ethos, and logos.
1. Network is important in reaching the group's audience. Circulation of their different texts were also very important.
ReplyDelete2. Integrating emotional appeals in composing can be very effective!
3. The cupcakes were great!
4. I would definitely integrate the group's presentation skills and specifically integrating baked goods.
1. all of that terms were involved!
ReplyDelete2. from this project i learned about the importance of organization and design.
3. Such great work, guys. Not only did you guys make delicious cupcakes that i inhaled in one bite but your project was so well done. i can't believe you made an app! thats so impressive and shows your dedication. you were also so aware of your organization and all of the details. along with that, the brochure was extremely well designed, adorable, easy to follow, organized, etc.
4. always makes sure social media is up to date so your content is correct and not misleading!
1. assemblage/remediation shown in the colors of the poster.
ReplyDelete2. baked good are an effective mode of circulation..
3. the cupcake QR codes were the best part...
4. everyone loves food and it's an effective way to get someone to listen to you/to circulate your idea
1) Their audience is anybody interested in rescuing a dog or volunteering with Last Hope. They circulated their flyer, and the pull tabs made the circulation extremely effective.
ReplyDelete2) writing, editing, and composing included getting to know the company your representing very well so that you get the job done effectively.
3) I like that they knew the cause very well and had a lot to say about it
4) I would take away the pull tab flyer idea
1. I learned that communication is key with an organization.
ReplyDelete2. I learned about pull tabs! They were helpful for measuring effectiveness of the text.
3. I liked their intentional choosing of photo to evoke emotion and action in the audience. (EX: Puppy pleading on the flyer.)
4. I would use their placement of photos to sway an audience.
1. They talked about different places they circulated their brochure and flyers. I thought it was smart to take it to Mervs.
ReplyDelete2. They had to edit their brochure after sending it to the organization based on what they wanted.
3. I liked that they passed out cupcakes with business cards attached, it is a good, easy advertisement because who doesn't want a cupcake?
4. I would definitely take the cupcake with business cards ideas. It's super smart!
1. Audience, Circulation, and Material
ReplyDelete2. I learned about the importance of material; reffering to making the brochure with a better material.
3. I really liked the brochure and the flyer actually made me tear up
4. I learned about the importance of materiality and connecting to the intended audience.
1. The circulation of cupcakes is a really good really tasty idea. It appears that they had a really good circulation with the spread of their tear away fliers and their brochures.
ReplyDelete2. I learned that it is really easy to appeal to people get an audience to take your information when you give them food to go along with it.
3. I really liked that they fed us all cupcakes, like honestly made my day. I also liked their idea of an app that sounds really complicated and impressed me.
4. Something I could take from this presentation for future professional use is having hard copies of the texts during the presentation so that who you are speaking to have something physical to view.
1. Distribution and placement aided to their success.
ReplyDelete2. They talked a lot about the struggles with the project and I think that is important to talk about in relations to editing.
3. The cupcake really got me interested in the presentation which worked well.
4. Calling places where ads were posted to understand the response was key in understanding project success.
1. The brochure is informative to an audience, and assembling the brochure looks like it was work.
ReplyDelete2. Composing a text, especially for an organization, needs feedback from the org, as the brochure is an example of. Composing the flier, creating texts with elements that will incite emotion in an audience
3. I loved everything! Everything looked so good, I can't decide which was my favorite.
4. Making your texts look really professional and thinking about how they will he received I something this group did really well.
1. Circulation and network by using a website.
ReplyDelete2. I learned that pull tabs are very effective in measuring the success of a flyer.
3. I liked the flyer and the pathos that was used with the photo of the sad dog.
4. If the organization is something you feel connected with, it is easy to work with them.
1. Audience: people looking to adopt dogs like at vet clinics and mervs
ReplyDeleteCirculation: flyers in places were pet owners could be found
Genre and design: using the emotions behind rescuing dogs in their design and genre
2. Communication and common meeting place was a constraint.
3. love how passionate they were. I could also tell that they were thinking outside of the box while thinking of places to drop their flyers.
4. Their video was really great and included pictures, social media links, and rhetoric.
1. Circulation was really shown in the different ways they created texts. Both prints and media
ReplyDelete2. Not all texts need to be in the same medium
3. CUPCAKES!!!!!! Its obvious. But also really they created an app that's incredible. Also A++ everything about this project is great and it is very clear you guys worked very hard
4. I would use their creation of an app to show all their work
1. I saw the use of circulation in the types of artifacts that they used and the places in which they made a point of having the artifacts posted both around campus and on social media platforms
ReplyDelete2. I learned more about the constraints associated with every project.
3. I liked the campaign video the most. I feel that video footage is the best way to advocate for an emotional campaign and a media that is easily circulated on all social media platforms and through news platforms as well.
4. I liked their use of teamwork in communicating directly with the organization
Audience, material, design
ReplyDeleteI learned that you should always double check with your company before releasing any texts created to the public.
I love the cupcakes! Thanks :) Also, the puppy video was adorable.
I would use the flyer design in my own presentation.
1. Assemblage and audience were enacted
ReplyDelete2. All three are a back and forth process
3. The brochure due to amount of information put into it.
4. Know how to work your audience.
1. constraints with organization. Looked into what type of audience they were hoping to target.
ReplyDelete2.Being creative with the distribution part of creating texts can be important.
3.Wow!!!!! an app is an excellent way to help the cause. Very professional all around.
4. being committed to the organization can transform the way others see your work and organization in a positive light.
1. I think the group focuses a lot on circulation.
ReplyDelete2. effort in circulation can go far with the right amount of effort.
3. I really liked the groups video. It was so cute and definitely sparked my interest.
4. I would take away how informative they were about the organization and their own experience.
thanks for the cupcakes omg!!!
ReplyDeletebrochure, flyer, video
I liked the colors and aesthetic and the way that the cupcakes even matched the artifacts. Putting the artifacts in areas where people bring animals is a really great idea.
1. Audience is a bit wider than most of the other groups. Is more of an advertising/informational campaign than promoting specific events.
ReplyDelete2. Adobe creative is worth it
3. I liked the way each text felt similar, and promoted the main goal of the organization.
4. Choosing specific locations to post flyers/brochures.Try to limit waste of paper/resources
1. They circulated brochures and flyers both in the community and the University and seemed to be very successful. They also used social media circulation.
ReplyDelete2. I learned that video can be very effective.
3. I really liked the video.
4. By making social media material, they met a need for the organization, which is always a good thing.
1.This group had a great understanding of their audience and the material they were supposed to be circulating.
ReplyDelete2. I learned that writing and composing for a client involved a bit of research beforehand.
3. I liked their flyer because the color scheme was very appealing and still included enough information.
4. From this presentation I learned that it is very helpful to use your own connections to create an impact for the said organization.